
Aboriginal Dreamtime Stories – The Rainbow Serpent Story Retell

Remind yourself about the main points of the Rainbow Serpent Story by watching this video:
Today, you will be using descriptive writing to retell the Aboriginal legend “The Rainbow Serpent” in your own words.
To add interest to your writing, think about how you can use different words to start your sentences. Consider the poster below for ideas:

Independent Activity:
- Open your green lined book.
- Rule a line under any previous work.
- Write today’s date.
- Write the heading “My Rainbow Serpent Retell”
- Using this story-starter below, write your version of the Rainbow Serpent.
- Your written piece should have between 10 and 14 sentences.
- Use the EDITING CHECKLIST to guide your writing.
- Take a photo of your sentences and send to your teacher on Compass.
STORY STARTER:
Long, long ago in the Dreamtime, when the earth lay sleeping and nothing moved or grew, the Rainbow Serpent awoke and slithered out from beneath the earth…








